tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1586080509912068029.post302057300959145992..comments2023-07-04T03:04:37.725-07:00Comments on The Veteran Experience | Ben Shaw: High Country, Part IVBen Shawhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08280885836684955658noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1586080509912068029.post-82952028162460256382009-04-27T21:04:07.160-07:002009-04-27T21:04:07.160-07:00I thought there were no stampedes out there. Cool...I thought there were no stampedes out there. Cool. Good way to set it up!Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12340456181501341820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1586080509912068029.post-13909840990446570722009-04-28T12:37:44.612-07:002009-04-28T12:37:44.612-07:00I just started reading from Part 1. Very impressi...I just started reading from Part 1. Very impressive writing. I will continue reading as soon as the next Part is ready!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1586080509912068029.post-8519803418891750572009-04-28T13:30:25.650-07:002009-04-28T13:30:25.650-07:00Your writing is getting better as you go. Keep goi...Your writing is getting better as you go. Keep going. And don't take too long with the next part!! :)<br><br>Good stuff. A cowboy story with no gun slinging, fighting, not even any women. You have to write well to keep people interested in something so simple.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1586080509912068029.post-15028775664216938652009-04-28T19:00:15.645-07:002009-04-28T19:00:15.645-07:00Better. I'm glad Tim coughed this time. Talk...Better. I'm glad Tim coughed this time. Talking was good. No monologues this time. People feeling things other than cold. Better.Elizabethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07763209657254848735noreply@blogger.com